Post by The Caribbean Crusader on Aug 14, 2005 13:49:34 GMT -5
PLEASE READ BEFORE YOU POST: Hey all! Time for another cooperative fanfic about, well, us! Another adventure for Angels, Sidekicks, Sidekicks-in-Training, and Newbie Swooners (i.e. all of us on these here boards)! So, here's the rules:
1. My kicks have started a story, with a few additions from DB's kicks. Anyone is welcome to post the next installment. If you are writing yourself in, work yourself into the plot that is already going and pay attention to who's already in it. NEW: You may also just add an installment without writing yourself in, if you prefer.
2. Keep your additions to the story at a reasonable length (see my first installment below). No addition should ever require more than one post to fit into the thread. Remember, the key is for everyone to be able to contribute and have fun. Don't hijack the story.
3. Be careful with how you portray your fellow writers, go ahead and write them as you see them, but don't make anyone an obvious dork. NEW: Exceptions would be if you know another poster well enough to play with their character at no offense to them. Also, you may portray yourself as a dork if you want to.
4. Comments on how the story is going are welcome! If you're just commenting and not adding, please begin your comment with OOC: to let us know.
5. Humor is most welcome in the story. Be flexible and above all HAVE FUN!
Let the story begin...
(Written by JCD and OBS)
It is a cool and foggy September night...JCD and Obs walked down the long deserted street discussing the film they just watched..
"I simply love the Corpse Bride! It's really hilarious at some times! Could you Imagine being in Victor’s situation..that would be freaky.." JCD said
"Yeah, it would be...I’ve always been a bit frightened by the dead.." Obs told her
The girls suddenly noticed everything had gotten even quieter and an eerie wind rushed by them..
"What's going on? And why do I feel like someone is fallowing us" She asked JCD in a whisper
"I don't know" JCD answered "I feel the same way.."
..
The two girls turned around to see who was fallowing..in the distance they saw the shadow of a very tall lanky man that was very recognizable to them..
"Victor?!"they gasped
"What?" Obs said, looking extremely shocked as well as confused "You can't be here, how can you be here?"
"Look Girls..there not much time to explain..but there is something very strange happening in the land of the dead..and I really need some Angels’ help..” Victor explained
"Well I suppose we can help" Obs sputtered still confused by his existence..
“ How can we help..” JCD said
" You see..." Victor began to explain"Something strange has happened..and Im Rather scared it will get worse.Well its kind of hard to explain..you see a few citezens of the land of the dead have strangely disapeared," Victor continued," it starts with them changing..like..like..they're coming alive again or something, then next thing you know they are gone...and my Bride is acting strange im frightened it may happen to her next.."
" But Victor how can we help you?" Obs questioned.
" Well I'm not quite sure yet." said Victor,"but I figured you two would be a better help then most of the bone heads down there...."
“Right..But Victor were just side kicks we not professionals yet..” JCD said a little unsure
'I think you're right JCD.. Victor we’re going to need more help..help from Real Angels..” Obs agreed..
“well then lets go get them...Where are they?” Victor said..
The girls grabbed victor by the hand and started to run towards the big building down the street they knew as the Johnny’s angel headquarters.. And entered
They ran down the hall and arrived in front of a large oak door with a big Golden Doorknob with the letters"C.C." engraved in the center. inside they heard mad laughter and cannons booming.
" what on earth"Victor gasped
JCD reached for the doorknob..but Obs grabbed her hand and knocked on the door first..looking up at Victors confused face.
" Be right there lassys.." CC's voice called from within the door. they then heard a couple loud thuds and bangs until she swung open the door and grinned Jack was behind her smiling wickidly.. smoke and fog came through the doorway.
" Why hello CC....Jack.Hope we arent interupting anything.." JCD started..
" Oh no no no..Jack and I were just having a little Ole' fun is all ," CC said kindly. " werent we Jack?"
" Oh yes..tons of fun..loads." Jack said grinning still.
" well..Jack, CC, this is Victor..he came to us for help..theres trouble down in the land of the dead you see..and we were wondering if you could help us.." Obs said.." seeing as how..you have experience with death and all.."
" well..of course we can help..We'd love to..overjoyed..enraptured.."CC said, Jack agrreing as well..
" Well..we really must get going.." Victor said " Im afraid we really dont have much time.."
"Wait..Im sure we can find some other Angels that can help just as well..the more the merrier.." CC said...
(Written by Sugarbutt)
SB peered around the corner of the hallway, eavesdropping on JCD and CC's conversation. An idea began to form in her mind, and she smiled.
"Psst! Victor!" She whispered, trying to get his attention.
Victor looked at her a bit oddly, wondering why she was being so secretive. He walked over to her slowly, and looked her over curiously. She was in army fatigues, and looked as if she were ready for combat.
"What is it that you need help with? You know, I could help you. Just say the word and I'm your man-er-well...technically woman, but who's counting?" SB smiled broadly, and looked at Victor expectantly.
(Written by Artisan)
"Likewise," said Artisan, who stepped out from the shadows a moment later garbed in nomadic attire. She was greeted by a further frightened expression from Victor.
"Hey SB," Artisan said. She turned to Victor. "You'll be requiring varied experise on this venture. And anyway, this Land of the Dead sounds like one interesting place. What do you think? ...And why are we whispering, hmm?"
(Written by Sugarbutt)
SB quirked an eyebrow and turned to look at Artisan with mild amusement. She shrugged. "Dunno, perhaps so the other's won't hear?" She winked and patted Artisan on the shoulder. "Actually...I don't know why it matters if they hear or not...I just thought it made it seem all the more mysterious."
Ok, anyone else may continue on with the story!
1. My kicks have started a story, with a few additions from DB's kicks. Anyone is welcome to post the next installment. If you are writing yourself in, work yourself into the plot that is already going and pay attention to who's already in it. NEW: You may also just add an installment without writing yourself in, if you prefer.
2. Keep your additions to the story at a reasonable length (see my first installment below). No addition should ever require more than one post to fit into the thread. Remember, the key is for everyone to be able to contribute and have fun. Don't hijack the story.
3. Be careful with how you portray your fellow writers, go ahead and write them as you see them, but don't make anyone an obvious dork. NEW: Exceptions would be if you know another poster well enough to play with their character at no offense to them. Also, you may portray yourself as a dork if you want to.
4. Comments on how the story is going are welcome! If you're just commenting and not adding, please begin your comment with OOC: to let us know.
5. Humor is most welcome in the story. Be flexible and above all HAVE FUN!
Let the story begin...
(Written by JCD and OBS)
It is a cool and foggy September night...JCD and Obs walked down the long deserted street discussing the film they just watched..
"I simply love the Corpse Bride! It's really hilarious at some times! Could you Imagine being in Victor’s situation..that would be freaky.." JCD said
"Yeah, it would be...I’ve always been a bit frightened by the dead.." Obs told her
The girls suddenly noticed everything had gotten even quieter and an eerie wind rushed by them..
"What's going on? And why do I feel like someone is fallowing us" She asked JCD in a whisper
"I don't know" JCD answered "I feel the same way.."
..
The two girls turned around to see who was fallowing..in the distance they saw the shadow of a very tall lanky man that was very recognizable to them..
"Victor?!"they gasped
"What?" Obs said, looking extremely shocked as well as confused "You can't be here, how can you be here?"
"Look Girls..there not much time to explain..but there is something very strange happening in the land of the dead..and I really need some Angels’ help..” Victor explained
"Well I suppose we can help" Obs sputtered still confused by his existence..
“ How can we help..” JCD said
" You see..." Victor began to explain"Something strange has happened..and Im Rather scared it will get worse.Well its kind of hard to explain..you see a few citezens of the land of the dead have strangely disapeared," Victor continued," it starts with them changing..like..like..they're coming alive again or something, then next thing you know they are gone...and my Bride is acting strange im frightened it may happen to her next.."
" But Victor how can we help you?" Obs questioned.
" Well I'm not quite sure yet." said Victor,"but I figured you two would be a better help then most of the bone heads down there...."
“Right..But Victor were just side kicks we not professionals yet..” JCD said a little unsure
'I think you're right JCD.. Victor we’re going to need more help..help from Real Angels..” Obs agreed..
“well then lets go get them...Where are they?” Victor said..
The girls grabbed victor by the hand and started to run towards the big building down the street they knew as the Johnny’s angel headquarters.. And entered
They ran down the hall and arrived in front of a large oak door with a big Golden Doorknob with the letters"C.C." engraved in the center. inside they heard mad laughter and cannons booming.
" what on earth"Victor gasped
JCD reached for the doorknob..but Obs grabbed her hand and knocked on the door first..looking up at Victors confused face.
" Be right there lassys.." CC's voice called from within the door. they then heard a couple loud thuds and bangs until she swung open the door and grinned Jack was behind her smiling wickidly.. smoke and fog came through the doorway.
" Why hello CC....Jack.Hope we arent interupting anything.." JCD started..
" Oh no no no..Jack and I were just having a little Ole' fun is all ," CC said kindly. " werent we Jack?"
" Oh yes..tons of fun..loads." Jack said grinning still.
" well..Jack, CC, this is Victor..he came to us for help..theres trouble down in the land of the dead you see..and we were wondering if you could help us.." Obs said.." seeing as how..you have experience with death and all.."
" well..of course we can help..We'd love to..overjoyed..enraptured.."CC said, Jack agrreing as well..
" Well..we really must get going.." Victor said " Im afraid we really dont have much time.."
"Wait..Im sure we can find some other Angels that can help just as well..the more the merrier.." CC said...
(Written by Sugarbutt)
SB peered around the corner of the hallway, eavesdropping on JCD and CC's conversation. An idea began to form in her mind, and she smiled.
"Psst! Victor!" She whispered, trying to get his attention.
Victor looked at her a bit oddly, wondering why she was being so secretive. He walked over to her slowly, and looked her over curiously. She was in army fatigues, and looked as if she were ready for combat.
"What is it that you need help with? You know, I could help you. Just say the word and I'm your man-er-well...technically woman, but who's counting?" SB smiled broadly, and looked at Victor expectantly.
(Written by Artisan)
"Likewise," said Artisan, who stepped out from the shadows a moment later garbed in nomadic attire. She was greeted by a further frightened expression from Victor.
"Hey SB," Artisan said. She turned to Victor. "You'll be requiring varied experise on this venture. And anyway, this Land of the Dead sounds like one interesting place. What do you think? ...And why are we whispering, hmm?"
(Written by Sugarbutt)
SB quirked an eyebrow and turned to look at Artisan with mild amusement. She shrugged. "Dunno, perhaps so the other's won't hear?" She winked and patted Artisan on the shoulder. "Actually...I don't know why it matters if they hear or not...I just thought it made it seem all the more mysterious."
Ok, anyone else may continue on with the story!