Post by Bex00001 on Sept 15, 2007 8:04:44 GMT -5
I don't own any original 21 Jump Street characters, but there are a few that have been created by me, obviously they are no where near as good as the originals! I'm still working on this, and don't know if it's going to go anywhere good yet =S. I would love comments please...tell me what I'm doing wrong! Haha.
Mark 101"Turn to page 101 in your World History textbooks," the teacher, Mr Paige, shouted.
The class carried out the instruction simultaneously. Almost every textbook carried the same marking, on page 101, that had been adorned over the school walls, floors, stairs; by one unknown student.
~~~
"Iokage!" Penhall called, dubbing out the rest of the voices in the Chapel. Penhall made his way through the staff and clapped Hanson on the back as he walked. He found Ioki, feet up on his desk, eyes closed and hands behind his head.
"Did you hear me shout you?" Penhall frowned.
"Sure" Ioki knew how to keep him in suspense.
"Well?! Well?!" Doug blurted as he smacked his hand down on the desk and the unsuspecting Ioki flipped his legs down and flicked his eyes open.
"What?" He carried on playing Doug for all it was worth and strolled over to Hoffs and Hanson at the water cooler.
"Did you get the tickets?"
The other three smirked at Doug's exaggerated anxiousness.
"Yeah," he slowly replied, taking a sip from the water-filled plastic cup, looked back at Doug and gave him a cheesey grin.
"So Penhall-" Judy started, it was her turn to wind-up Doug.
"Wait!" Doug spun around to Judy Hoffs and narrowed his eyes. "I know what you're trying to do Jude, winding me up! This is important!" He said as he turned to face them all and threw out his arms as if he was giving an important lecture. "These tickets are for the game on Saturday...that is sold out by the way! Come on Ioki, hand them over then!!"
Tom joined in, "Ohhh! The game that I got tickets for a month ago and you tried to bargain them off me?" he said flashing a quick side smile. Doug shot him and impatient look, but turned back to Ioki - the ticket holder! Hanson widened his eyes and let out a chuckle behind his friend's back.
"Ok! Ioki laughed, "but Doug, I went to loads of trouble to get these for us, so you gotta earn your ticket."
"What?" His mouth was still open from his exclaimatio and his mouth widened.
"Oh my God, Penhall, you are such a drama queen!" Hoffs giggled at Doug still holding his shocked face.
"What do you mean earn it?"
"Hey Captain Fuller," Tom held his hand in a wave to their captain walking straight to them.
Mark 101"Turn to page 101 in your World History textbooks," the teacher, Mr Paige, shouted.
The class carried out the instruction simultaneously. Almost every textbook carried the same marking, on page 101, that had been adorned over the school walls, floors, stairs; by one unknown student.
~~~
"Iokage!" Penhall called, dubbing out the rest of the voices in the Chapel. Penhall made his way through the staff and clapped Hanson on the back as he walked. He found Ioki, feet up on his desk, eyes closed and hands behind his head.
"Did you hear me shout you?" Penhall frowned.
"Sure" Ioki knew how to keep him in suspense.
"Well?! Well?!" Doug blurted as he smacked his hand down on the desk and the unsuspecting Ioki flipped his legs down and flicked his eyes open.
"What?" He carried on playing Doug for all it was worth and strolled over to Hoffs and Hanson at the water cooler.
"Did you get the tickets?"
The other three smirked at Doug's exaggerated anxiousness.
"Yeah," he slowly replied, taking a sip from the water-filled plastic cup, looked back at Doug and gave him a cheesey grin.
"So Penhall-" Judy started, it was her turn to wind-up Doug.
"Wait!" Doug spun around to Judy Hoffs and narrowed his eyes. "I know what you're trying to do Jude, winding me up! This is important!" He said as he turned to face them all and threw out his arms as if he was giving an important lecture. "These tickets are for the game on Saturday...that is sold out by the way! Come on Ioki, hand them over then!!"
Tom joined in, "Ohhh! The game that I got tickets for a month ago and you tried to bargain them off me?" he said flashing a quick side smile. Doug shot him and impatient look, but turned back to Ioki - the ticket holder! Hanson widened his eyes and let out a chuckle behind his friend's back.
"Ok! Ioki laughed, "but Doug, I went to loads of trouble to get these for us, so you gotta earn your ticket."
"What?" His mouth was still open from his exclaimatio and his mouth widened.
"Oh my God, Penhall, you are such a drama queen!" Hoffs giggled at Doug still holding his shocked face.
"What do you mean earn it?"
"Hey Captain Fuller," Tom held his hand in a wave to their captain walking straight to them.