Post by The Imprisoned Songstress on Sept 6, 2008 10:47:17 GMT -5
Welcome to the Haunted Writing corner. This is a place for poetry, short stories, fan fics and even cooperative/role play stories (go to the devil's wife cafe to discuss ideas) about Mr. T! Please put a rating on your piece, R or PG-13 because we do have people underage here. Here are mine! Enjoy and feedback is welcome
Sweeney’s pledge rated Everyone
Why come back to a place filled with so many bad memories?
My wife & daughter are lost
But not for long
My precious wife & daughter
How I miss you so!
Yes I must come back to this sad place to free you.
You will be avenged, I promise!
Then I can make a new life for us.
But first to get the judge
Yes the judge
I must plan the plan to get him
Then we will flee from this black pit FOREVER!
Yes I must come back to this sad place to free you.
Everything I do is for you & only you
Needing You Rated PG
Sweeney, when will you be mine?
I know, wait but….
I need you my dearest!
Really and truly I do
People may call me crazy
I call it Love my dear
It may shock you Sweeney Todd
But I do Love you
Yes, Mr. T, all of you
Even for your current obsession
Yes, even that
Shocking I know
What can I say??
I’m in Love
So I hope I’ll have you soon my love
I can wait
Yes, wait is what I’ll have to do
For you I’d do anything
Sweeney Dialog rated everyone
*Allie strolls down Fleet Street and sees Mrs. Lovette getting ready for her opening*
“Hi there Mrs. Lovette”
“Oh, hi love.” She says with a smile
“Things are looking good here.”
* I look around the pie emporium approvingly*
“Thanks dear, things are coming along. Are you coming to my opening?”
“Uh…sure, is Mr. Todd in?” I say in a rush in an attempt to change the subject
She is so busy cleaning that she doesn’t notice the hurry in my voice
“He’s upstairs looking out the window as always.” She says disapprovingly
“Oh well maybe I shouldn’t bother him” I say turning to leave
“Oh go on up, dear. He shouldn’t be alone. He thinks about the past too much. Besides your one of the sidekicks training to angel him, aren’t you?”
“Yes I am!”
“Well he always has time for you. He is really looking forward to having one of you. Apparently, I’m not enough” Lovette says bitterly
“I’m sure that’s not true.” I say with a smile
Says to self, “What am I saying, course its true, but I can let her know.”
A forced smile comes on my face
“Allie come on up, sweetheart.” Sweeney shouts down to me
“Oh Sweeney you scared me. How long have you been there?"
“Not long, come up and visit me!” He says with a haunting smile
*He walks towards me and we hug*
“Oh sweetheart, you seem tense, what’s wrong?”
*I look at him nervously and shrug*
“Please, have a seat. What can I do to make you less tense?”
*Sweeney reaches for his blades*
“Oh Sweeney, you don’t have to hurt anyone!”
*I eye him nervously*
“It’s very sweet of you but I don’t need that kind of help.” I say with a smile
*Sweeney slowly puts down the blade*
“You do know I would do anything for you, right?” Sweeney says focused on me intently
“I do” I say nodding
“So what is it?” Sweeney says encouragingly
“Well it’s just that…. Oh Sweeney, I don't want to loose you!"
"Why would you?" Sweeney asks concerned
"It’s a possibility. C & I both want you & only one can be your angel."
"Well....you are both VERY eager to be my Angel."
“We are very determined to Angel you, it’s true.” I say with a smile
"When did you first want me?"
While we talk he begins to shave my legs. He notices me looking
“Does this bother you?” Sweeney says softly
“No, course not! Why would it?”
“Okay then please continue.” Sweeney says with a smile
“Besides I’ll have the softest legs on JA and everyone will be jealous!”
We laugh and I spy Sweeney blush a little
“Oh Mr. T, did I make you blush?”
I smile and giggle a little
Sweeney is looking for once lost for words
“Ah yes well...”Sweeney says absently
"Okay well I’ll continue by saying, since the first time I saw you. I like the fact that you can sing.”
“Oh you like my singing, do you?”
“Oh yes” I say nodding
With a smile Sweeney asks “Anything else?”
“You live here in London”, I say dreamily
*I look around the shop & the street with aww and Sweeney follows my gaze*
“Well this is my home. I am glad you like it.”
“I certainly do.”
“You might be spending lots of time here.”
“I hope to stay. You seem so sad & I want to help!"
“I’ve had a rough time.” Sweeney says with a mixture of sadness and anger in his voice
“I am aware of your changed circumstances, I am very sorry.”
“You wish to stay but do you approve of what I’m doing with Mrs. Lovette?" Sweeney gives me a skeptical look
"Well....not the blood...but if you feel must do to get that horrible judge then I'll help." I say feeling sick to my stomach but standing firm
“I must take revenge for my wife and daughter!”
“Of course you must!” I say reassuringly
"You are so much like my daughter." Sweeney says with a quick smile
"I am glad I remind you of Johanna, I see Sweeney getting angry so I quickly add I know I'm not!"
*At this I see Sweeney relax*
“I’m so sorry. I don’t mean to replace your daughter” I say hesitantly
"No your not, but its nice to be reminded sometimes." Sweeney says with a little distance in his voice.
"Well that's what I want to be here for, if you want me?" I say confidently
"I do, I am so lonely. Mrs. Lovette is nice but she wants a husband. She thinks I don't know what she is playing at but I DO. By the sea, INDEED!" Sweeney rages
*I feel VERY nervous and look for an escape*
Trying to stop this rage I say, “Shh, honey, you don’t want her to hear you, do you?”
“Oh let her hear!” Sweeney shouts
I peak out the window to see if Mrs. Lovette is coming up the stairs. She isn't...I guess she's used to it. Sweeney's notices and grabs my arm
"What are you looking at?" Sweeney says still angry
"Oww..nothing I thought I heard something outside!"
I gave him a hurt look
“Oh, sorry dear, I can have a temper”
“I’ve noticed, we will have to work on that. My point is that if I become your Angel I know what you want, even if she doesn't.”
I watch Sweeney nod his head
“My angel pledge to you is help you stay focused towards your goal. If the judge is what you want, then I will do me best to help.”
"Alright, I can deal with that. You'd better go, customer coming."
"Oh well I'll leave you to your work. I hope we can talk soon."
"Go!!! Come back soon." He says firmly
“I’ll be back I promise!”
*We hug again and I turn and fly down the steps &I hear Sweeney shout*
"I hope you feel better!”
"I do thanks!" I shout
"Train hard!"
"I will!"
"Bye Mrs. Lovette!"
*she waves at my back*
"Hurry back dear. Don’t forget the opening!"
”How could I forget!” I mutter
Enjoy and happy writing
Sweeney’s pledge rated Everyone
Why come back to a place filled with so many bad memories?
My wife & daughter are lost
But not for long
My precious wife & daughter
How I miss you so!
Yes I must come back to this sad place to free you.
You will be avenged, I promise!
Then I can make a new life for us.
But first to get the judge
Yes the judge
I must plan the plan to get him
Then we will flee from this black pit FOREVER!
Yes I must come back to this sad place to free you.
Everything I do is for you & only you
Needing You Rated PG
Sweeney, when will you be mine?
I know, wait but….
I need you my dearest!
Really and truly I do
People may call me crazy
I call it Love my dear
It may shock you Sweeney Todd
But I do Love you
Yes, Mr. T, all of you
Even for your current obsession
Yes, even that
Shocking I know
What can I say??
I’m in Love
So I hope I’ll have you soon my love
I can wait
Yes, wait is what I’ll have to do
For you I’d do anything
Sweeney Dialog rated everyone
*Allie strolls down Fleet Street and sees Mrs. Lovette getting ready for her opening*
“Hi there Mrs. Lovette”
“Oh, hi love.” She says with a smile
“Things are looking good here.”
* I look around the pie emporium approvingly*
“Thanks dear, things are coming along. Are you coming to my opening?”
“Uh…sure, is Mr. Todd in?” I say in a rush in an attempt to change the subject
She is so busy cleaning that she doesn’t notice the hurry in my voice
“He’s upstairs looking out the window as always.” She says disapprovingly
“Oh well maybe I shouldn’t bother him” I say turning to leave
“Oh go on up, dear. He shouldn’t be alone. He thinks about the past too much. Besides your one of the sidekicks training to angel him, aren’t you?”
“Yes I am!”
“Well he always has time for you. He is really looking forward to having one of you. Apparently, I’m not enough” Lovette says bitterly
“I’m sure that’s not true.” I say with a smile
Says to self, “What am I saying, course its true, but I can let her know.”
A forced smile comes on my face
“Allie come on up, sweetheart.” Sweeney shouts down to me
“Oh Sweeney you scared me. How long have you been there?"
“Not long, come up and visit me!” He says with a haunting smile
*He walks towards me and we hug*
“Oh sweetheart, you seem tense, what’s wrong?”
*I look at him nervously and shrug*
“Please, have a seat. What can I do to make you less tense?”
*Sweeney reaches for his blades*
“Oh Sweeney, you don’t have to hurt anyone!”
*I eye him nervously*
“It’s very sweet of you but I don’t need that kind of help.” I say with a smile
*Sweeney slowly puts down the blade*
“You do know I would do anything for you, right?” Sweeney says focused on me intently
“I do” I say nodding
“So what is it?” Sweeney says encouragingly
“Well it’s just that…. Oh Sweeney, I don't want to loose you!"
"Why would you?" Sweeney asks concerned
"It’s a possibility. C & I both want you & only one can be your angel."
"Well....you are both VERY eager to be my Angel."
“We are very determined to Angel you, it’s true.” I say with a smile
"When did you first want me?"
While we talk he begins to shave my legs. He notices me looking
“Does this bother you?” Sweeney says softly
“No, course not! Why would it?”
“Okay then please continue.” Sweeney says with a smile
“Besides I’ll have the softest legs on JA and everyone will be jealous!”
We laugh and I spy Sweeney blush a little
“Oh Mr. T, did I make you blush?”
I smile and giggle a little
Sweeney is looking for once lost for words
“Ah yes well...”Sweeney says absently
"Okay well I’ll continue by saying, since the first time I saw you. I like the fact that you can sing.”
“Oh you like my singing, do you?”
“Oh yes” I say nodding
With a smile Sweeney asks “Anything else?”
“You live here in London”, I say dreamily
*I look around the shop & the street with aww and Sweeney follows my gaze*
“Well this is my home. I am glad you like it.”
“I certainly do.”
“You might be spending lots of time here.”
“I hope to stay. You seem so sad & I want to help!"
“I’ve had a rough time.” Sweeney says with a mixture of sadness and anger in his voice
“I am aware of your changed circumstances, I am very sorry.”
“You wish to stay but do you approve of what I’m doing with Mrs. Lovette?" Sweeney gives me a skeptical look
"Well....not the blood...but if you feel must do to get that horrible judge then I'll help." I say feeling sick to my stomach but standing firm
“I must take revenge for my wife and daughter!”
“Of course you must!” I say reassuringly
"You are so much like my daughter." Sweeney says with a quick smile
"I am glad I remind you of Johanna, I see Sweeney getting angry so I quickly add I know I'm not!"
*At this I see Sweeney relax*
“I’m so sorry. I don’t mean to replace your daughter” I say hesitantly
"No your not, but its nice to be reminded sometimes." Sweeney says with a little distance in his voice.
"Well that's what I want to be here for, if you want me?" I say confidently
"I do, I am so lonely. Mrs. Lovette is nice but she wants a husband. She thinks I don't know what she is playing at but I DO. By the sea, INDEED!" Sweeney rages
*I feel VERY nervous and look for an escape*
Trying to stop this rage I say, “Shh, honey, you don’t want her to hear you, do you?”
“Oh let her hear!” Sweeney shouts
I peak out the window to see if Mrs. Lovette is coming up the stairs. She isn't...I guess she's used to it. Sweeney's notices and grabs my arm
"What are you looking at?" Sweeney says still angry
"Oww..nothing I thought I heard something outside!"
I gave him a hurt look
“Oh, sorry dear, I can have a temper”
“I’ve noticed, we will have to work on that. My point is that if I become your Angel I know what you want, even if she doesn't.”
I watch Sweeney nod his head
“My angel pledge to you is help you stay focused towards your goal. If the judge is what you want, then I will do me best to help.”
"Alright, I can deal with that. You'd better go, customer coming."
"Oh well I'll leave you to your work. I hope we can talk soon."
"Go!!! Come back soon." He says firmly
“I’ll be back I promise!”
*We hug again and I turn and fly down the steps &I hear Sweeney shout*
"I hope you feel better!”
"I do thanks!" I shout
"Train hard!"
"I will!"
"Bye Mrs. Lovette!"
*she waves at my back*
"Hurry back dear. Don’t forget the opening!"
”How could I forget!” I mutter
Enjoy and happy writing
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